번호학생 원문수정된 문장수정 이유 및 문법 설명1The most impressive travel place is 'Da Nang'.The most memorable trip for me was to Da Nang in Vietnam.‘impressive travel place’는 어색한 표현 → memorable trip 사용. 'to Da Nang'으로 자연스럽게 방향 표현. ‘for me’로 강조.2It is my first 동남아 trip and my first trip with my friends.It was my first trip to Southeast Asia and also my first trip with friends.‘동남아’ → Southeast Asia. ‘is’ → ‘was’ (..