성인 영어회화 자기소개 교정

영어 자기소개 문장 교정표

번호	원문	수정된 문장	수정 이유 및 문법 설명
1	Hi, My name is nxxxx kim.	Hi, my name is Nxxxx Kim.	고유명사 첫 글자는 대문자. 문장 중간의 My → my.
2	My age is 2x years old.	I am 2x years old.	‘My age is ~’는 어색함. 보통 나이는 ‘I am ~ years old’로 표현.
3	I'm live in Ixxxxx.	I live in Ixxxxx.	be동사와 일반동사를 함께 쓸 수 없음. I'm 삭제.
4	I like trip, and I enjoy the eating delicious food and resting well during the trp.	I like traveling, and I enjoy eating delicious food and relaxing during the trip.	trip은 가산명사라 단독 사용 부적절 → traveling. the eating → eating. trp → trip 오타 수정.
5	Especially I like visiting new place and feeling the unique culture of there area.	I especially like visiting new places and experiencing the unique culture of the area.	Especially I like → I especially like (부사 위치 조정). new place → new places. there area → the area.
6	The reason of learning English, I want to communicate with various people around the world.	I want to learn English to communicate with people around the world.	The reason of ~는 어색함. 목적 표현은 to부정사로. 문장 구조도 간결하게 수정.
7	My English skill is still lacking but, I want to glow slowly by studing English hard.	My English is still not very good, but I want to keep improving by studying hard.	skill → English: 영어 실력은 보통 My English로 표현. glow → grow. studing → studying. slowly → keep improving. 쉼표 제거.
8	Thank you for listening!	Thank you for listening!	수정 없음. 문법적으로도 자연스럽고 완성도 높은 문장.